Nowadays, in many countries people are spending too much on wedding some people think that it is essential to spend huge amount of money on wedding celebration. Other thing that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Wedding is an essential part in every culture around the world. At present, individual use large amount of money in weddings globally. While few community things that it have to be plain and less expensive.

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answer will discuss both the sides of

given argument

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the given argument

before reaching to an appropriate conclusion. To commence with

first statement

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the first statement

there are many things to be there in the

first

statement. Few individuals try to maintain the status of fruitfulness in society. They try to arrange Grand marriage

ceremony

and make their repetition good. Decide

this every

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this, every

people

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person

get

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gets

marry

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married

once only in life. So, people try to make it memorable by arranging

magnificent

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a magnificent ceremony

ceremony

. To

examplify

be characteristic of

exemplify

, nowadays people arranging wedding at

exotic location

Suggestion

an exotic location

exotic locations

such

as Palaces, seashores as well as in foreign countries.

However

, others believe that manage location should not be costly. The primary reason for

this

belief is that the cost of wedding could be used in many beneficial

way

Suggestion

ways

instead

grand wedding

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a grand wedding ceremony

ceremony

. The money can be used in education and development of poor children.

For instance

a businessman in Gujarat donated his wedding outgoings to a martyr's family. Apart from these people can get into debt by taking

loan

Suggestion

a loan

to organise

grand wedding occasion

Suggestion

a grand wedding occasion

. In conclusion

you can

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you, can

we say that every coin has two sides.

However

, I believe that

wedding

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the wedding ceremony

ceremony

should be simple and the

expense expense

Accept comma addition

expense, expense

should be used in other helpful ways.

Tue Mar 03 2020

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Nowadays, in many countries people are spending too much on wedding some people think that it is essential to spend huge amount of money on wedding celebration. Other thing that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion.

Your opinion

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree with that statement

Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons. Is it a positive or negative development?

Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?

What skills do you think a person should have to be a successful parent ?