Nowadays, in many countries people are spending too much on wedding some people think that it is essential to spend huge amount of money on wedding celebration. Other thing that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wedding is an essential part in every culture around the world. At present, individual use large amount of money in weddings globally. While few community things that it have to be plain and less expensive.
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answer will discuss both the sides of
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the given argument
given argument
before reaching to an appropriate conclusion. To commence with
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the first statement
first statement
there are many things to be there in the
first
statement. Few individuals try to maintain the status of fruitfulness in society. They try to arrange Grand marriage
ceremony
and make their repetition good. Decide
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this, every
this every
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person
people
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gets
get
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married
marry
once only in life. So, people try to make it memorable by arranging
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a magnificent ceremony
magnificent
ceremony
. To
be characteristic of
exemplify
examplify
, nowadays people arranging wedding at
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an exotic location
exotic locations
exotic location
such
as Palaces, seashores as well as in foreign countries.
However
, others believe that manage location should not be costly. The primary reason for
this
belief is that the cost of wedding could be used in many beneficial
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ways
way
instead
of
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a grand wedding ceremony
grand wedding
ceremony
. The money can be used in education and development of poor children.
For instance
a businessman in Gujarat donated his wedding outgoings to a martyr's family. Apart from these people can get into debt by taking
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a loan
loan
to organise
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a grand wedding occasion
grand wedding occasion
. In conclusion
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you, can
you can
we say that every coin has two sides.
However
, I believe that
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the wedding ceremony
wedding
ceremony
should be simple and the
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expense, expense
expense expense
should be used in other helpful ways.

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