There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I'm writing the letter to inform you about the present situation of

bus

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the bus

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service in my area.

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, the busses are not on time , there is no proper schedule of them. The busses are too much crowded in the morning because of office and school timing , and there is not any proper seating plan for ladies and gents. Because of these problems, I am persistently late from my office which makes a bad impression on my reputation.

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, if they are on time , there is not enough space to even stand

in

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on

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the bus , because of

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the rush

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of the people and students. So , I am humbly requesting you to make a proper schedule of bus's arrival time

,

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and increase the number of transport so

everbody

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everybody

can get space to sit or

atleast

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at least

stand.Kindly divide some

area

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for ladies and gents so they can travel comfortably. I really appreciate

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it if

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you take notice of these problems. Best regards, XYZ