There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I'm writing the letter to inform you about the present situation of
bus
service in my area. Correct article usage
the bus
Firstly
, the busses are not on time , there is no proper schedule of them. The busses are too much crowded in the morning because of office and school timing , and there is not any proper seating plan for ladies and gents.
Because of these problems, I am persistently late from my office which makes a bad impression on my reputation. Nevertheless
, if they are on time , there is not enough space to even stand in
the bus , because of Change preposition
on
rush
of the people and students.
So , I am humbly requesting you to make a proper schedule of bus's arrival timeAdd an article
the rush
a rush
,
and increase the number of transport so Remove the comma
apply
everbody
can get space to sit or Correct your spelling
everybody
atleast
stand.Kindly divide some Correct your spelling
at least
area
for ladies and gents so they can travel comfortably.
I really appreciate Fix the agreement mistake
areas
if
you take notice of these problems.
Best regards,
XYZCorrect pronoun usage
it if
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