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Nowadays, some business face problems with the new employees who are just finished their education and may lack interpersonal skills such as the ability to work in a team. What do you think is the main cause of the problem? How can it be solved?

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In
this
 day and age, more and more job opportunities are provided for the postgraduates as the development of the economy.
However
, the fresh employees who
are just finished
Suggestion
have just finished
are just finishing
just finish
 their education that lack the interpersonal skills become the problem of
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
business
.
Hence
, it is important for us to discuss the causes of
this
 trend and its solution.
First
 of all, when the postgraduates leave their comfort zone and start to work in the competitive workplace, they will feel frightened and nervous because of the new circumstance. They would rather be quiet and do the work alone, nor to communicate with the colleagues.
In addition
, the education system is the crucial point of
this
 problem
,
Accept space
,
for the force feeding as a teaching
method is cut
Suggestion
method is to cut
 off the ability of showing own thought and merit. Those people do not have the personal opinions because they are used to follow the instructions step by step.
Besides
,
business
 can assign some experienced colleagues to assist the new employees to join in the team.
Although
 the employees will be shy and unfamiliar at the
first
 time, they will get familiar with the job content and the colleagues sooner at the accompanying of co-worker. They will be more active to raise the suggestion and cooperate with the teammates and it is
aim
Suggestion
aimed
 for the development of
business
. In conclusion,
business
 must play an essential role to pay attention to the employees' working situation as they are the only recourses to pay the effort to enhance
growth
Suggestion
the growth
 of
business
Suggestion
the business
.
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