Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children.

Reading books are incredibly significant way to
aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
knowledge. From that prospective, many people believe reading electronic books are
efficient
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more efficient
than watching TV and playing video game through
computer
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a computer
the computer
. I
am strongly disagree
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strongly disagree
with the statement as I think, juvenile should experience all the available activities to express their potential talent aside
of
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from
reading books. There is no doubt reading is an important habit for children to obtain
necessary knowledge
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the necessary knowledge
which is essential to guide them a glorious life. Reading books help children to know about histories, traditions, science, cultures and languages that are not available in their regular textbooks.
Thus
, children are tending to be more advance, informative and innovative.
In addition
, reading books inspire students to compose interesting books and choose writing as their future career.
Similarly
,
offspring those
Accept comma addition
offspring, those
are
interest
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interested
interesting
to science may choose to read books and cross steps towards their goals by reading interested articles which will take official study step ahead.
On the other hand
, despite saying books are incredibly significant to earn information, it is not a hobby for many students as well.
Consequently
, books should not equip
there
of them or themselves
their
free time and harm
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
hobbies.
Moreover
, it might be dull and boring for kids to keep themselves on the boundary of reading as they are studying
notable number
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a notable number
of
subject
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subjects
in the school. After tedious schooling hour’s adolescence are in need of physical and mental activities to recover their brain.
Furthermore
, watching TV and computer game keep a variety in their daily routine and having different things to do will keep them interested and energetic in their daily routine. To sum up, despite saying uncountable benefits of reading electronic books, children should be free to have fun by watching
favorite TV show
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a favourite TV show
favourite TV show
favourite TV shows
the favourite TV show
and playing
computer game
Suggestion
computer games
a computer game
to
reenergize
cause to be alert and energetic
energize
them which is important to relax and rest their brain.

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