describe yourself as a student and what motivates you to study master in a foreign country

My name is Syed Ali Hasan and I am looking forward to apply for the
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program in Mechanical Engineering implemented by Ontario Tech University in Sept, 2020. I am a hardworking, passionate and motivated Mechanical Engineer who perceives
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to be highly valuable for my professional career. I have a strong academic background in Mechanical Engineering that makes me a strong candidate for
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competitive program. I am a sharp, perceptive, hardworking, quick individual with a high aptitude for absorbing difficult concepts in engineering courses. I
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a Bachelor’s
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in Mechanical Engineering from
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of the top
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of the country, Institute of Space Technology (IST), Islamabad, Pakistan. As an out stationed
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pursuing a full time
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, I faced few difficulties which resulted in ups and downs in my academic grades.
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, I still managed to be
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of my batch and graduated with an excellent grade. After completing my bachelor’s
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, I took IELTS in which I scored 7.5 bands to get admission in a Master’s
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at Ontario Tech University, which is
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in Canada. As a part of my
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done two
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internships, which
helped me a lot to learn practical knowledge.
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of my
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was in Karachi Nuclear Power Plant (KANUPP), where I learnt and gained a great amount of knowledge on steam power plants, nuclear reactor and turbo-machinery. The
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made me develop my interests in Thermodynamics, Heat Transfer, Fluid Mechanics, Power Generation and Green Energy, in which I am willing to do my thesis or research work as a
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student
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. Another
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was in Indus Motor Company, a leading automotive company in Pakistan. The
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helped me develop some great skills and attribute to perform and manage quality improvement activities as a mechanical engineer. I believe my education and career has led a solid foundation to pursue
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a Master’s Degree
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in Mechanical that can help me develop and learn more about specific areas relating to mechanical, which would help me in my professional goals. Being a child of a scientist who works in a power plant, power generation and energy were fascinating to me since my childhood. As a mechanical engineer, I stands a great chance to
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my dreams. Since Canada is
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of the country where researches are being carried out which are similar to my interests, and Ontario Tech University is
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the best institute where I can follow my dreams and goals. I would like to acquire and learn more and perform research in heat transfer, thermodynamics, and renewable energy. I performed few projects in these fields
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as “Designing a Boiler for Steam Turbine Power Plant”, “Sizing and Selection of Centrifugal pump for Desalination Plant” and “A Study of Vapor Absorption Cycle”. These
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research or project and course work.
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, I believe that the university offers the best opportunities for me to educate myself. As an International
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I would be financing my own studies for which I might be doing part-time jobs,
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the part-time Masters would be a great fit for me, so that I can focus on my studies and work as well. Canada is
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of the dream destination for International Students, as there are several opportunities as a
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jobs are easy to find and wages are handsome in most cases. Since I was a
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it would not be difficult for me to adjust and adapt in a new state or a country. Regarding my personality, I believe I am a very responsible and respectful individual who adores to seek new experiences in life. I always enjoy socializing with new people and making new friends. Apart from my academic attributes, I am a very handy sportsman. I won several athletic games in my high school, and
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got opportunities to lead cricket and soccer team at IST which assisted enhanced my leadership qualities
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very essential in your professional career. I was awarded “Best Batsman of the year” in 2019 for my cricketing skills. I
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have a wonderful family and love spending time with them. They support me very much and do their best to encourage me to take new steps in life. As a mechanical engineer, it would be
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beneficial for me to get admitted in a Master’s Program at Ontario Tech University, where I can
fulfill
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my dreams and study, learn and gain in-depth knowledge in the areas of my interests. Thank you very much for your consideration.

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