The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart compares five co
untries namely F
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countries, namely
rance, USA, Spain, China and Italy in terms of the
number
of tourists and tourist expenditure in the years 2012 and 2013. In general, the
number
of tourists in France was hi
ghest while t
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highest, while
he highest spending on international tourism was seen in the USA during the period shown.
In addition
, both the
number
of tourists and the amount of money spent by tourists of the five nations mentioned increased slightly. In 2012, the
number
of tr
avelers i
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travels
travelling
travellers
n France and the USA we
re 8
Suggestion
was
3
million
and 66.7
mi
llion respectively,
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million, respectively
and after one year, these figures increased slightly to 84.7
million
and 69.8
million
. There was a 3
million
rise in the
number
of Spanish tourists while China saw an
d
Suggestion
a
ecrease in the
number
of tr
avelers d
a person who changes location
travellers
uring the period shown. The
number
of tourists in Italy was lowest in 2012 and grew by 1.3 mi
llions i
Suggestion
million
n 2013. With regard to tourist spending, the USA had the highest tourist spending ($126.2
billion
) while the lowest expenditure was seen in Italy ($41.2
billion
) in 2012. These figures rose to $139.6
billion
and $43.9
bi
llion respectively.
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billion, respectively
In addition
, France, China and Italy witnessed an increase in the amount of money spent by their tourists.

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