You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Dear Sara, I hope
this
letter finds you well.I am writing to you to postpone my visit to your home in Canada, which was planned
in
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March as I had a serious issue at my home in Kuwait.
First
, I would like to explain what happened
last
week.As you
now
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I live in a small apartment which is located on the ninth floor in a huge building.
Last
Thursday there was heavy rain and
this
is unusual here in Kuwait as it is a desert country.
Therefore
, I had leakage on my ceiling in all rooms including the kitchen and the bathroom.The contractor informed me that we need at least three weeks to do the required fixations.
Second
, I am really sorry for any
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caused to you because of postponing my visit as it was something beyond my hands and I could not do anything.
Third
, I will try to find a flight by the end of May, maybe on Thursday, May 25 if
this
is suitable for you,
otherwise
we will have to cancel the trip as I will not be available later.
Finally
, thanks for your understanding and I will be waiting for your response.Please, let me know if you would like to have any special gift from Kuwait before I travel. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli
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