Some people become famous at a young age. Explain the advantages and disadvantages of this along with your opinion.

Achieving name and fame is a dream of every human being in the current world of gizmos oriented and opulent lifestyle. Popularity strikes a few when they are just blooming, gives rise to a
too numerous to be counted
myriad
myraid
of positives and negatives which will be discussed in-depth prior reaching to the writer's perspective as an outcome. Probing into the benefits of attaining success by a youngster during the early stage of life
Accept space
,
,
as being famous, the child is financially
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stronger
more strong
and secure as compared to his peer group. Along with that he can finance his own expenditures and able to shoulder some responsibilities of his family.
Moreover
, becoming a celebrity at
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a young age
young
age
make him an
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inspiring
inspirational
personality, motivator and can influence others to achieve great heights with relentless efforts and endeavour.
For instance
, Messi, a renowned player
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becomes
become
famous at the
age
of 17 due to his outstanding talent and
declare to be true or admit the existence or reality or truth of
admitted
admittedly
admittedy
his efforts.
However
, achieving popularity at a primitive
age
also
lever that activates the firing mechanism of a gun
triggers
trigger
trigers
some unwanted situations fir the teenager, since to maintain the position, one has to compromise with academics, he can get ample time
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to
for
practice to chisel his skills and results in better performance.
Therefore
, sacrificing education while working is surely
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
deterimental
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to
for
a child's holistic development,
for example
, a survey conducted by a National Talent Hunt
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shows
show
revealed statistics that 80% of the youth, who become famous at
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an
a
early stage of life have left their studies in between without completing it. From the writer's viewpoint gaining success at
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a young age
young
age
is beneficial as one gets the clear aim of his life and out himself on the right path from the very beginning and owns a great opportunity to cherish his dreams,
however
, must complete required qualifications to be a sensible citizen of
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the future
future
. The cessation of the confabulation is that in order to maintain the innocence of a famous its a responsibility of parents and the society to maintain the balance of a child, being a famous personality and a normal human being, so that he can reap the fruits of both phases.

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