Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Now a
days
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day's
day
climate
change
is
very dangerous issue
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a very dangerous issue
in the universe.
what
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What
are the reasons for
this
global warming and
waht
what thing
what
are the possible solutions that
government
and individual persons can look
on
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at
for
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This
essay will discuss both the reasons and solution about global warming.
Firstly
,
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,
this
climte
the weather in some location averaged over some long period of time
climate
change
happens mainly because of releasing carbon dioxide into
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
.
however many
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However, many
However many
industries releases dangerous chemicals that harm ozone layer.
For
example in
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example, in
2019 a geologist from Cambridge University conducted a survey that shows yearly temperatures are increasing drastically
.
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.
Secondly
,
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,
Also
deforestation is
also
another serious issue that boosts the
climate
change
.
moreover in
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Moreover, in
Moreover in
a growing population in the
world people
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world, people
are cutting down the forests and constructing buildings and living homes.
for
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For
instance
recent survey
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a recent survey
from
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of
world geological agency says that around 12% of forests are
tourned
moved around an axis or center
turned
into big cities The
government
should introduce some new policies and rules like controlling the environmental
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
that causes by humans and
also
individuals in the society
also
support
government
by supporting their policies.
for
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For
example in
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example, in
delhi
a city in north central India
Delhi
the petrol
vehicals
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
are banned by
government
and use of plastic by individuals is reduced which effected
climate
change
recent days. In conclusion, the
climate
change
is
very big issue
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a very big issue
in present
days which
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days, which
caused by the damaging of
ozone layer
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the ozone layer
and cutting down the forests.
which
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Which
can be controlled by some
government
policies and reducing plastic by individuals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global issue
  • severity
  • urgency
  • greenhouse effect
  • human-induced
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • industrial pollution
  • environmental regulations
  • emission standards
  • renewable energy sources
  • green technologies
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • energy consumption
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • eco-friendly
  • extreme weather conditions
  • biodiversity
  • economic stability
  • collective responsibility
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