Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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day's
day
days
climate
change
is
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a very dangerous issue
very dangerous issue
in the universe.
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What
what
are the reasons for
this
global warming and
what thing
what
waht
are the possible solutions that
government
and individual persons can look
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at
for
on
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This
essay will discuss both the reasons and solution about global warming.
Firstly
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,
,
this
the weather in some location averaged over some long period of time
climate
climte
change
happens mainly because of releasing carbon dioxide into
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the atmosphere
atmosphere
.
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However, many
However many
however many
industries releases dangerous chemicals that harm ozone layer.
For
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example, in
example in
2019 a geologist from Cambridge University conducted a survey that shows yearly temperatures are increasing drastically
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.
Secondly
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,
,
Also
deforestation is
also
another serious issue that boosts the
climate
change
.
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Moreover, in
Moreover in
moreover in
a growing population in the
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world, people
world people
are cutting down the forests and constructing buildings and living homes.
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For
for
instance
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a recent survey
recent survey
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of
from
world geological agency says that around 12% of forests are
moved around an axis or center
turned
tourned
into big cities The
government
should introduce some new policies and rules like controlling the environmental
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
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that causes by humans and
also
individuals in the society
also
support
government
by supporting their policies.
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For
for
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example, in
example in
a city in north central India
Delhi
delhi
the petrol
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
vehicals
are banned by
government
and use of plastic by individuals is reduced which effected
climate
change
recent days. In conclusion, the
climate
change
is
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a very big issue
very big issue
in present
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days, which
days which
caused by the damaging of
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the ozone layer
ozone layer
and cutting down the forests.
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Which
which
can be controlled by some
government
policies and reducing plastic by individuals.

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