The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.
The pie chart illustrates the
three
primary factors that contributed to the degradation of land
all over the world including over-grazing, deforestation
and over-cultivation
, and other
. The table gives information on how these categories affected Correct pronoun usage
others
land
in North America, Europe
, and Oceania in the 1990s. Overall
, over-grazing were
the greatest cause of worldwide less productive Change the verb form
was
land
. Among the three
regions, Europe
had the largest proportion of affected land
by three
causes
. The opposite was true for North America.
The pie chart shows that over-grazing accounted for the highest percentage
which is 35% of causes
of less productive land
. However
, there seemed to be small differences between this
figure of
over-grazing and Change preposition
for
deforestation
. It appeared that 30% of agricultural land
were
destroyed because of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
deforestation
. Moreover
, over-cultivation
also
had negative
effect on worldwide Add an article
a negative
land
, which had percentage
of 28%. Add an article
a percentage
the percentage
On the other hand
, other factors accounted for 7% of land
destruction.
From the given table, total
degraded Correct article usage
the total
land
by the three
causes
during the 1990s in Europe
was 23%. This
percentage
nearly doubled Oceanian (13%) and was more than four times as much as North American (5%). In Europe
, less productive land
by deforestation
represented 9.8% while
over-cultivated land
and over-grazed one accounted for 7.7% and 5.5%. Meanwhile, over-grazing took up the greatest proportion among
Change preposition
of
three
Correct article usage
the three
causes
in Oceania, which made up 11.3%. However
, only 1.7% of Oceanian land
was destroyed by deforestation
. Over-cultivation
seemed to have no effect on this
region
Change noun form
region's
land
in the period. However
, it was the main cause, which accounted for 3.3% of region
whose less productive Fix the agreement mistake
regions
land
, among three
categories in North America while
1.5% of this
area's degraded land
was caused by over-gazing and 0.2% was affected by deforestation
. In total, the percentage
of degraded land
by over-grazing, deforestation
, and over-cultivation
in these three
regions took up 41% that nearly halved the world
total Change noun form
world's
percentage
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, land, deforestation, over-cultivation, europe, causes, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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