online shopping will be the closing reason of all shops in cities and towns, do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, online
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
Is a source of entertainment and information.
This
is true for all age
group
Suggestion
groups
,
Accept space
,
especially teenagers and adults.
the
Suggestion
The
traditional view is that purchasing online stuffs close for the malls, critics
;
Accept space
;
nonetheless
,
agrue
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
argue
that online shopping Can not be close for big shops. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss my views with few supporting points and examples.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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