The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart depicts the proportion of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables each day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Overall, it can be seen that the highest percentage of consuming fruit and vegetables was women, while children considerably accounted for the least. The percentage of women who ate fruit and vegetables started at just over 20 % in 2001.
This
figure,
then
rose steadily to reach a peak of almost 35 % in 2006, before falling slightly to 30 % in the final year. In terms of men and children eating fruit's and vegetables remain edible stable in the
first
three years (about 17% and 12% respectively.) From
this
point the proportion of men climbed up and reached at about 27 % in both 2006 and 2007, after which it dropped to a boutique 26 %. A similar growth in the figure was evident reaching 25 % in 2007 and around 24 % in the final year.

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