A country becomes more intereting and develops more quickly when ts population includes a mixture of nationalities

The chart describes about ten countries with the highest spending on
travel
in 2014. There are China, United States, Germany, United Kingdom, Singapore, South Korea, Hongkong, India, Malaysia, and Taiwan. As the diagram suggests, China Spent up to 100
Billion
USD
. It was the highest for the consumer spending on
travel
in 2014. The
second
place was United States and Germany, both of them had the same spending with 85
billion
USD
. The
third
position United Kingdom with spending on
travel
grabbed 50-55
billion
USD
. The
Next
place Singapore held 25
Billion
USD
. South Korea were equal to Hongkong with 20
Billion
USD
. After that India has been just over 15
billion
, while Malaysia and Taiwan stood at the bottom with around 10-12
Billion
USD
. Regarding from
this
chart, we can conclude that China was the country with the highest position and Taiwan was the lowest of spending on
travel
in 2014.

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