Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays
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artists belonging to different fields show their talent by depicting their
art
work
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Restrictions are always recommended on their performance of
art
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I think
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they should be free from any
boundries
the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundaries
and I will discuss
this
point of view in detail in the upcoming paragraphs
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To begin
with the reasons why
art
should not be bound in limits
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first
and the foremost is that artists will be able to show their talent because they can represent painting and movies in new ways and
also
they can do new experiments in
art
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Moreover
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artists get help in gaining popularity to
nation
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the nation
because they present their
art
at national and international level and get name and fame
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In
this
way
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it helps to bring fortune to their country.
In addition
to
this
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restrictions can affect
livelihoods
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the livelihoods
of artists and if their
art
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artwork
work
is
baned
forbidden by law
banned
burned
bound
they will be unable to earn because their
art
pieces could not get sold out
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Due to
this
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less people will opt for
art
work
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Furthermore
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it is their constitutional right to display their thought in the form of
art
and
also
many
art
lovers will affect if the
work
of artists is restricted because most people cannot get
such
paintings and movies
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Last
but not the least
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art
never flourishes
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has never flourished
under restrictions
necause
for the reason that; on account of
because
they need
free mind
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a free mind
to demonstrate their message and thoughts and limits may halt their thinking capacity
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To sum up
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artists hold an important place in society and people are mature enough to decide what is right and wrong
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Therefore
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there is no need to put boundaries on it
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Accept space
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