Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages.

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advancing in amount or intensity
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a politically organized body of people under a single government
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a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
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