As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is argued by many people that companies have necessary communal duties
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to making a profit, while others claims that making profit is the fundamental aspect for them so they can focus only their gains.
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with,
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company's
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is restricted so they cannot allocate funds to social investments. To demonstrate, many firms prefer to invest their limited funds to infrastructures for their companies
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as new production systems, education for their workers. In 2012, I worked in a company and
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firm has a chance to construct a fitness centre for workers, these place probable increased
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motivations, while firm owner preferred to buy a new machine for production. Without doubt,
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company was eager to
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distribute according to a plan or set apart for a special purpose
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funds for public awareness due to
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machine was capable
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gain more income than personal’s motivation.
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, many companies are prone to social developments. To
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, if citizens adjusted better life conditions, they would want to new social opportunities. Without doubt, no firm does not jeopardize their system. According to Hans Brigel, a history professor at Cambridge University, Ottoman Empire’s economy system was collapsed due to globalization. As can be predicted, many labour heard new gadgets, high-quality fabric, especially coffee. Price of the coffee was excess to an Ottoman worker’s monthly salary so citizens wanted an improvement
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improvements affected the
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of the government.
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, Ottoman’s treasure went to the debt due to personal’s wages.
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, some business is eager to allocate a
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for the public duty due to their marketing strategy. To demonstrate, these companies gain customers with their social investments.
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, one of the biggest cereal producers in the world, they invest %20 of their income to UNICEF and Red Cross so they gained
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the customer’s sympathies
. As stated by an observation company that they observed 100.000 people who ate one cup of Kellogs cornflakes in their breakfast. Surprisingly, %70 of them preferred to Kellogs due to their social supports. In conclusion, social awareness is not compulsory for firms, because paying their labour’s wage and making profits are their crucial duties so they cannot jeopardize their
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for the
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community
benefits.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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