In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

It is irrefutable that
food
is the basic necessity of every human being. Even though, there have been significant advancements in the field of agriculture, there is still starvation around the
world
. In
this
essay, I will present some causes
such
as
poverty
and
population
.
Also
, will present some solution to overcome
this
problem. The most significant factor affecting
hunger
is
poverty
. Mechanical advancement in in the field of technology did help farmers harvest and cultivate faster, but it increased the production cost as well.
As a result
, overall market cost of fruits, vegetables and grains increased, affecting daily workers and people with no money. To illustrate
this
, as per the research by Walmart supermarket, over the
last
decade, grocery prices increased 3 times.
In contrast
to GDP decreased by 5%.
This
proved that a lesser number of people can afford daily
food
and are unable to feed their family. Another compelling factor affecting
hunger
is
population
. As per the
world
index
food
production around the
world
is equivalent to what it was a decade ago, but
Suggestion
the population
population
has drastically changed.
Therefore
,
food
export has been in decline, as the government is hardly able to feed their inland
population
.
For example
, Nigeria depends on
food
import from other countries, which is now limited. As a consequence, Nigeria has the biggest
hunger
rate around the
world
. A solution to eradicate
hunger
can be achieved by donating
food
.
Firstly
, restaurants around the
world
, throw away excess
food
,
instead
, they should donate it to nearly shelter, so that people can eat and won't sleep hungry.
Also
, when buying grocery, everyone should donate some percentage of fruits and veggies, to export.
This
might start a global support for countries where they lack agricultural land and would be able to feed its citizen's. In conclusion,
poverty
and
population
are two biggest factors affecting
hunger
in the current
world
. While, donating
food
, locally or globally is the way to help global citizen's and eradicate
poverty
.

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