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The tablet illustrated the expenditures of four car companies in five types of advertisement individually in the UK in 2002. These five types of advertising included press, cinema , outdoor, radio and TV.

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The tablet illustrated the expenditures of four car companies in five types of
advertisement
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 individually in the UK in 2002. These five types of advertising included press, cinema
,
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,
 outdoor, radio and TV. Among the five types of advertising, TV was the most popular one and all four companies invested the highest
amount
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 of their annual expenditure in it individually.
Cetirizine
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 and Vauxhall spent more than 2/3 of
total annual
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the total annual fee
fee
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, $70 millions
an
located at or attached to
on
 $65 millions correspondingly. The
second
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 popular
advertisement
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 was press among
two companies
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the two companies
, Renault and Rover, with $45
million
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 and $ 38
million
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individually
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individuals
. The
third
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 popular advertising method was radio. All companies had
fair
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a fair amount
amount
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 of
annual
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the annual fee
fee
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 with $15
million
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 of their individual annual
fee
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. Advertising in outdoor occupied small
amount
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 of
annual
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the annual fee
annual fees
fee
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, all less than $ 10
million
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, between 2 to 7
million
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. Renault and Vauxhall still invested in cinema
advertisement
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 individually with $ 6
million
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 and % 5
million
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;
however
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, Rover and Cetirizine spent zero in it. Overall, advertising
in
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on
 TV and
press
Suggestion
the press
 remain popular among vehicles companies. The other three types of
advertisement
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 only occupied a small
amount
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 of sharing.
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