In some countries healthcare is free, paid by the state. In other countries, payment is divided between the state and people themselves. Discuss both systems, and say which one is better.

Together with ongoing population and the number of patients annually, is overwhelming.
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The healthcare system
Healthcare system
is a crucial factor for each and every individual. I believe healthcare system should be free due to various reasons.
To begin
with, advance technology had made life easier as well as complicated. Treatments which rely on advance technological machinery cost a fortune,
for example
, plastic surgery, cancer treatments, etc. These expenses cannot be handled by the patient alone.
In addition
, the taxation from the society had increased never before;
this
in-turn affects the financial status of an individual. I, myself pay tax- 15%
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of
from
my
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fortnight
fort-night
salary. “Work-covers”
such
as Super Annuations and Hesta, are loaded every financial payment day from an individual income. Government
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implements
implement
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a work
work
-covers in order to cover up health related complications
such
as a surgery etc.
In addition
, people contribute nearly
one of four equal parts
quarter
quatre
of their income on self insurance as a mandatory condition for all members. All of these organisations save money, promising to cover up potential health related conditions.
On the other hand
, there are fewer countries who cannot afford to provide free services depending on the financial crisis of the country.
However
, I suppose,
it is
it's
its
fair for the state to contribute half of the money to each
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patient
patients
in order to access quality treatments. In conclusion, I believe, the society invests a great deal of money on the state government by means of sub-divided organisations
such
as
a monthly payment made to someone who is retired from work
superannuation
super annuation
, taxation, insurance and many more. Obviously, it is the responsibility of the state government to provide free
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health care
healthcare
support.

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