Some people think that modern design for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. Advantage and disadvantage.

It is considered by many that contemporary designs for educational and work spaces should focus on making these areas more open and spacious. There are
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a range
range
of advantages to create more open spaces, they
also
have some drawbacks that must be noted.
First
and foremost benefit of open spaces is that it creates a more natural environment. If we have the large place
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room, then
room
then
the air can circulate easily which makes people happy and energetic.
Furthermore
, schools and offices can save plenty amount of money by large place. They do not have to take party plot or
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auditorium, on
auditorium on
rent to do extra activities like seminars, meetings and annual function.
For instance
, in my
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country, 70
country 70
% of schools organise their annual function in their own ground.
Moreover
, working out in the open area can make it easier to learn new things.
In contrast
, open spaces can cause some problems.
First
one is
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an increment
increment
in noise. When a large number of people sharing a classroom or office, the chance of noise generate is higher. If a student is trying to read or an employee is trying to do the
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work
then
they will not be able to concentrate.
Secondly
, extra money
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has
have
to be invested
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in
into
the large space of the rooms. Management
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has
have
to invest money on material
such
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paint
pain
, lights and so on. To conclude, the concept of open spaces for schools and offices are more successful because they create the positive environment.
In addition
, students and employees do their work more productively.

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