You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems.Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the details of the problems How are these affecting your family? Ask for possible solutions.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the problems associated with my new rented apartment.Let me inform you that I am your new tenant in apartment number 342, square block.Actually, me and my family are facing a lot of inconvenience due to two major problems. Let me explain my situation.I shift here, along with my family two weeks before.But we found that the inlet water pipe in the bathroom has a leakage which wastes a lot of water, and
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furthermore, it
furthermore it
is adversely affecting the water bill of our home.Another major concern is that the lock of the front door is not working properly,
therefore
we have to push hard to close it. Since we are both working parents, and our children remain all alone after school.
Thus
the lock of the main door gives us a sense of insecurity about our children and
hence
this
need to be rectified quickly. I would be extremely grateful to you if you call the plumber and carpenter as soon as possible,
otherwise
provide me their contacts so that I may call them.Since maintenance cost of damage is included within the rent, these are restricted me from doing it on my own. Hoping for a prompt response from you in
this
matter. Yours' faithfully, Kajal Maan

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