You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing in the matter of me staying in the
four season
Add a hyphen
four-season
hotel
in Jeddah, unfortunately
due to the air conditioning, Add the comma(s)
,unfortunately
damage
I could not make it to my cousin wedding due to the damage.
As you know the weather in Jeddah is very humid in July and you could not even pair yourself with it! Add an article
the damage
However
when I got in my room the room was very hot, I complained right away and after the one hour Change the verb form
waits
wait
the technical guy and explain that there was some manufacturing error because the Add the preposition
forwait
hotel
was new and it has been only several days since they opened it, after fixing it and the problem occurred the same midnight again and there were
no one to fix it because there Change the verb form
was
were
a holiday, I spent a miserable night especially that I cannot pair humidity at all, ordering some refreshment juices and ice creams.
I did not expect Change the verb form
was
this
service at all, not to mention the high price for the midnight because it has a nice view of the sea, I really want a refund for horrible
night I spent in the Add an article
the horrible
a horrible
hotel
, If not I am prepared to file a suit against the hotel
.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest,
Yours faithfully,
Mr John McFeeSubmitted by ishahd8 on
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