You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing in the matter of me staying in the

four season

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in Jeddah,

unfortunately

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due to the air conditioning,

damage

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the damage

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I could not make it to my cousin wedding due to the damage. As you know the weather in Jeddah is very humid in July and you could not even pair yourself with it!

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when I got in my room the room was very hot, I complained right away and after the one hour

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wait

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the technical guy and explain that there was some manufacturing error because the

hotel

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was new and it has been only several days since they opened it, after fixing it and the problem occurred the same midnight again and there

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no one to fix it because there

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a holiday, I spent a miserable night especially that I cannot pair humidity at all, ordering some refreshment juices and ice creams. I did not expect

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service at all, not to mention the high price for the midnight because it has a nice view of the sea, I really want a refund for

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night I spent in the

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, If not I am prepared to file a suit against the

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. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest, Yours faithfully, Mr John McFee