Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree. 9:33-10:13

Now-a-days, people are eating a lot of junk foods that causing different
health
issues. From that
propestive
of or concerned with or related to the future
prospective
, a certain group of people suggested that, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
ought to increase tax on
health
damaging
food
to inspire folks to come into
health concious
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the health conscious food
health conscious food
food
.According to my opinion,
generally public
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the general public
general public
should not be forced or pushed
to
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in
any direction as it may
results
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result
with
negatives
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negative
aspects, rather, the state
government
may run motivational activities. In
present age
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the present age
, people are consuming a huge number of
fastfood
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fast food
by knowing or without
concering
with regard or relation to
concerning
concern
conquering
the deleterious impacts of those ingredients of the foods. For examples,
cheaps
a boy or man
chaps
chips
Cheops
,
clod
having a low or inadequate temperature or feeling a sensation of coldness or having been made cold by e.g. ice or refrigeration
cold
drinks,
cheicken
the flesh of a chicken used for food
chicken
fries, and burgers are made by type of
food
's chemical which have dangerous side effects on
human body
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the human body
. Some people are aware about
the consequences but,
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the consequences, but
can't avoid them due to its mouth watering
flovour
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavour
flavours
.
However
, some other group of folks
are regulary eatting
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is regularly eating
are regulary eating
are regularly eating
are regularly eatting
are regular eatting
same type
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the same type
of
food
as it is easy to buy
in
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at
a
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an
affordable price without wasting much time.
Furthermore
,
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,
junk
food
are
ultimate
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ultimately
choose
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choosing
chosen
whose are working with hectic working hours. Suddenly, increase
on
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in
their daily
food
might terribly shock them and as a reaction they will begin to
critisize
find fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws
criticize
criticise
state
government
and their decisions. Other on
other hand
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the other hand
, the
government
should undergo a few inspiration measurement other than force a unlike tax.
For example
, the state cabinet should run multiple sports activities throughout the country to turn the people into
health
concering
be relevant to
concern
concerning
life.
Moreover
, the
government
should use warning notes on the pack of the unhealthy foods in
purpose
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the purpose
of being total
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
. Social media can be used to spread
negatives
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negative
impatcs
the striking of one body against another
impacts
of the particular foods aside of creating some motivational advertisement of consuming healthy
cusines
the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisines
cuisine
.
Consequently
, people will gradually
to turn
Suggestion
turn
into
health
concering
with regard or relation to
concerning
concern
ingredients and the impacts of the reducing business of junk foods will not effect
sudden shutdown
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a sudden shutdown
of industries and
unemployement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
. To sum up, some people believe imposing tax may reduce
negatives aspects
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the negative aspects
negative aspects
of unhealthy
cusines
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Cusines
casinos
cuisines
and drive people to healthy life. But
,
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,
accoprding
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
to my personal opinion
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think the
taxes
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tax
policy may result with violent reactions from victims
,
Accept space
,
rather the
government
should choose slower and motivational actions which will not be
sudden effect
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a sudden effect
on any parties.
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