Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree. 9:33-10:13

Now-a-days, people are eating a lot of junk foods that causing different
health
issues. From that
of or concerned with or related to the future
prospective
propestive
, a certain group of people suggested that, the
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
goverment
ought to increase tax on
health
damaging
food
to inspire folks to come into
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the health conscious food
health conscious food
health concious
food
.According to my opinion,
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the general public
general public
generally public
should not be forced or pushed
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in
to
any direction as it may
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result
results
with
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negative
negatives
aspects, rather, the state
government
may run motivational activities. In
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the present age
present age
, people are consuming a huge number of
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fast food
fastfood
by knowing or without
with regard or relation to
concerning
concern
conquering
concering
the deleterious impacts of those ingredients of the foods. For examples,
a boy or man
chaps
chips
Cheops
cheaps
,
having a low or inadequate temperature or feeling a sensation of coldness or having been made cold by e.g. ice or refrigeration
cold
clod
drinks,
the flesh of a chicken used for food
chicken
cheicken
fries, and burgers are made by type of
food
's chemical which have dangerous side effects on
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the human body
human body
. Some people are aware about
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the consequences, but
the consequences but,
can't avoid them due to its mouth watering
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavour
flavours
flovour
.
However
, some other group of folks
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is regularly eating
are regulary eating
are regularly eating
are regularly eatting
are regular eatting
are regulary eatting
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the same type
same type
of
food
as it is easy to buy
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at
in
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an
a
affordable price without wasting much time.
Furthermore
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,
,
junk
food
are
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ultimately
ultimate
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choosing
chosen
choose
whose are working with hectic working hours. Suddenly, increase
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in
on
their daily
food
might terribly shock them and as a reaction they will begin to
find fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws
criticize
criticise
critisize
state
government
and their decisions. Other on
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the other hand
other hand
, the
government
should undergo a few inspiration measurement other than force a unlike tax.
For example
, the state cabinet should run multiple sports activities throughout the country to turn the people into
health
be relevant to
concern
concerning
concering
life.
Moreover
, the
government
should use warning notes on the pack of the unhealthy foods in
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the purpose
purpose
of being total
having knowledge of
awareness
awarness
. Social media can be used to spread
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negative
negatives
the striking of one body against another
impacts
impatcs
of the particular foods aside of creating some motivational advertisement of consuming healthy
the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisines
cuisine
cusines
.
Consequently
, people will gradually
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turn
to turn
into
health
with regard or relation to
concerning
concern
concering
ingredients and the impacts of the reducing business of junk foods will not effect
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a sudden shutdown
sudden shutdown
of industries and
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
unemployement
. To sum up, some people believe imposing tax may reduce
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the negative aspects
negative aspects
negatives aspects
of unhealthy
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Cusines
casinos
cuisines
cusines
and drive people to healthy life. But
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,
,
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
accoprding
to my personal opinion
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,
,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
think the
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tax
taxes
policy may result with violent reactions from victims
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,
,
rather the
government
should choose slower and motivational actions which will not be
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a sudden effect
sudden effect
on any parties.

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