Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree. 9:33-10:13
Now-a-days, people are eating a lot of junk foods that causing different
health
issues. From that propestive
, a certain group of people suggested that, the of or concerned with or related to the future
prospective
goverment
ought to increase tax on the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
health
damaging food
to inspire folks to come into health concious
Suggestion
the health conscious food
health conscious food
food
.According to my opinion, generally public
should not be forced or pushed Suggestion
the general public
general public
to
any direction as it may Suggestion
in
results
with Suggestion
result
negatives
aspects, rather, the state Suggestion
negative
government
may run motivational activities.
In present age
, people are consuming a huge number of Suggestion
the present age
fastfood
by knowing or without Suggestion
fast food
concering
the deleterious impacts of those ingredients of the foods. For examples, with regard or relation to
concerning
concern
conquering
cheaps
, a boy or man
chaps
chips
Cheops
clod
drinks, having a low or inadequate temperature or feeling a sensation of coldness or having been made cold by e.g. ice or refrigeration
cold
cheicken
fries, and burgers are made by type of the flesh of a chicken used for food
chicken
food
's chemical which have dangerous side effects on human body
. Some people are aware about Suggestion
the human body
the consequences but,
can't avoid them due to its mouth watering Suggestion
the consequences, but
flovour
. the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavour
flavours
However
, some other group of folks are regulary eatting
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is regularly eating
are regulary eating
are regularly eating
are regularly eatting
are regular eatting
same type
of Suggestion
the same type
food
as it is easy to buy in
Suggestion
at
a
affordable price without wasting much time. Suggestion
an
Furthermore
,
junk Accept space
,
food
are ultimate
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ultimately
choose
whose are working with hectic working hours. Suddenly, increase Suggestion
choosing
chosen
on
their daily Suggestion
in
food
might terribly shock them and as a reaction they will begin to critisize
state find fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws
criticize
criticise
government
and their decisions.
Other on other hand
, the Suggestion
the other hand
government
should undergo a few inspiration measurement other than force a unlike tax. For example
, the state cabinet should run multiple sports activities throughout the country to turn the people into health
concering
life. be relevant to
concern
concerning
Moreover
, the government
should use warning notes on the pack of the unhealthy foods in purpose
of being total Suggestion
the purpose
awarness
. Social media can be used to spread having knowledge of
awareness
negatives
Suggestion
negative
impatcs
of the particular foods aside of creating some motivational advertisement of consuming healthy the striking of one body against another
impacts
cusines
. the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisines
cuisine
Consequently
, people will gradually to turn
into Suggestion
turn
health
concering
ingredients and the impacts of the reducing business of junk foods will not effect with regard or relation to
concerning
concern
sudden shutdown
of industries and Suggestion
a sudden shutdown
unemployement
.
To sum up, some people believe imposing tax may reduce the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
negatives aspects
of unhealthy Suggestion
the negative aspects
negative aspects
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and drive people to healthy life. ButSuggestion
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cuisines
,
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,
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to my personal opinion(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
,
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,
i
think the refers to the speaker or writer
I
taxes
policy may result with violent reactions from victimsSuggestion
tax
,
rather the Accept space
,
government
should choose slower and motivational actions which will not be sudden effect
on any parties.Suggestion
a sudden effect
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