Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that buying things on the internet is becoming more and more popular. Getting your books and groceries delivered to your doorsteps, to booking your air ticket within minutes have become very convenient. In
this
Essay, I will support my views how advantages of purchasing things online
in other respects or ways
otherwise
overweight
overweighs
its disadvantages. One of the major drawbacks of online shopping is the authenticity of the products available.
In addition
to
this
, at times the quality of
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the product
product
is not according to the expectations.
For example
, after several customer complaints online grocery store Grofers has been penalised by the food corporation of India for delivering sub-standard quality grocery items. Sometimes, the incomplete details of the product and services are displayed which leads to dispute.
For instance
, British
a duct that provides ventilation (as in mines)
Airways
airways
is facing
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trial
trials
for providing lofty discount during an online
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sale, but
sale but
didn’t
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inform
informed
customers that any baggage will be charged extra, eventually costing customers heavily. The most significant advantage of buying things online is that it opens the sky for
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customers
the customer
customer
, providing unlimited
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options, even
options even
from
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the far end
far end
of the globe.
In other words
, buyer
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has
have
the right to enter
access
excess
to the products that are not even available in his/her geographical location. Recently, over 3 million copies of latest autobiography of Indian cricketer “Playing it my Way” is purchased online by people living in North America.
Furthermore
, online shopping provides various options, discounts, latest style & trends, comparison
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tools, saving
tools saving
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a lot
lot
of time and energy of the buyer. To illustrate
this
point, on
justdial
.
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Com
com
customer can find, compare, book, modify the air tickets available from multiple airlines and
also
order grocery etc. To sum up, while there are few disadvantages to online shopping,
such
as
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the authenticity
authenticity
of products, improper online presentation, these must be weighed against the benefits like increased reachability, time saving and
the right to enter
access
excess
to endless options it offers. Personally, I feel that these benefits outweigh the disadvantages.

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