You work in an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe the training course you want to do -explain what the company could do to help you -say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing
this
letter because I want to participate to
Suggestion
in
t
he international training
course
for nurses, who work with disabled people. Two days ago I got an email, advertising an educational
course
for paramedics, who work with people with special needs.
This
annual training
last
for
fi
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the first two weeks
rst two weeks o
f every April. The requirement for the participation to
Suggestion
for
of
t
he educational
course
is not big: two pressure measuring devices and one package of medical elastic band. I would like to ask if our company could provide me with
this
equipment? Sara, my colleague, who took part in
this
training two years ago, strongly advised me to go too.
In addition
, if I participate to
Suggestion
in
this
educational
course
, it will be very fruitful for our whole team because I would transfer my knowledge to my colleagues. I'm looking forward to receiving an answer from yo
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
ur.
Regards, Alma

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