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You work in an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe the training course you want to do -explain what the company could do to help you -say how the course will be useful for your job

#work #company #advertisement #course #job #manager #-describe #-explain #-say
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing
this
 letter because I want to participate
to
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 the international training
course
 for nurses, who work with disabled people.
Two
 days ago I got an email, advertising an educational
course
 for paramedics, who work with people with special needs.
This
 annual training
last
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 for
first
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two
 weeks of every April. The requirement for
the
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participation
to
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 the educational
course
 is not big:
two
 pressure measuring devices and one package of
medical
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 elastic band. I would like to ask if our company could provide me with
this
 equipment? Sara, my colleague, who took part in
this
 training
two
 years ago, strongly advised me to go too.
In addition
, if I participate
to
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this
 educational
course
, it will be very fruitful for our whole team because I would transfer my knowledge to my colleagues. I'm looking forward to receiving an answer from
your
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. Regards, Alma

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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