A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Large number of students
like better; value more highly
prefer
perfer
to study English independently rather than participating in a formal class.
However
, often student
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finds
has found
find
it more complicated to manage their study without the help of the teacher.
This
essay will discuss why I agree with
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the statement
statement
above.
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Believe
believe
, self-motivated learning can be more productive by setting goals, the manners in the study process, and the time management. By self-prompting, students or learners can put themselves
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in
to
the high level of learning by printing modules, looking for needed recordings, collecting movies and watching them, downloading and listening to certain songs, or even doing some chats online with mates living in Western countries.
As a result
, students can do several things that are urgent to improve several skills which are
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lacking
lack
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independent
independents
independence
independently
and ignore few unnecessary things not to be done.
However
, as human being commonly, most of the people seem to be inconsistent to deal with individual learning. They need
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to accompany
accompanies
from teachers and classmates not only to enrich knowledge in class
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progress, but
progress but
also
to gain established goals together. By working for tasks, assignments, and
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presentations, students
presentations students
will not have much free time to conduct wasteful activities motivation to attempt
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a self - study
self-study
hardly. It is a truth that most people feel convenient to learn in
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silence
silent
, but
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comfortably
comfort
, in some ways, causes laziness and
as a result
, people cannot accomplish the English learning.
That is
why teachers are always needed to be involved. To sum up, I believe that both ways of learning have benefits and drawbacks,
therefore
, combining them together, without superiority one over another, will be
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extraordinarily
extraordinary
relevant
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to learning
to learn
English effectively.

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