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Some people think that children should learn how to compete, but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to become more useful adults. Express some reasons for both views amd give your own opinions

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Education of youth
have always been
Suggestion
had always been
 main issue in the world and there have
duscussion
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussions
 which character of children should possess primarily, some part of people think it is competition,
however
, others think that cooperation plays main role to childhood, while there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 personally believe that the benefits of cooperation far outweigh its drawbacks.
First
 of all, it is an indisputable fact that there are benefits
such
 as improving knowledge and being competitive. As a
consequently
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consequence
consequent
consequential
,
this
 trait
help
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helps
 even to government being highly developed country. It is
also
 interesting to note that
such
 well-known proverb where has competition, there has an increase
On the other hand
, some people think that impact of
conpetition
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
 lead to self-blame.
For instance
, during the competition a member of that group or person always have faced to fail which means aforesaid notion.
In addition
, it could be
reason
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a reason
the reason
 for being bad with others and competitor as well
Nonetheless
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would contend that in contribution have many advantages, one particularly good example of
this
 is people solve all problems mutually and
consequently
 most of
time
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the time
 they find
solution
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a solution
the solution
solutions
. By way of conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 once again reaffirm my position that work of people
together lead
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together leads
 to high level of achievements.
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