Some people think that children should learn how to compete, but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to become more useful adults. Express some reasons for both views amd give your own opinions

Education of youth
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had always been
have always been
main issue in the world and there have
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussions
duscussion
which character of children should possess primarily, some part of people think it is competition,
however
, others think that cooperation plays main role to childhood, while there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
personally believe that the benefits of cooperation far outweigh its drawbacks.
First
of all, it is an indisputable fact that there are benefits
such
as improving knowledge and being competitive. As a
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consequence
consequent
consequential
consequently
,
this
trait
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helps
help
even to government being highly developed country. It is
also
interesting to note that
such
well-known proverb where has competition, there has an increase
On the other hand
, some people think that impact of
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
conpetition
lead to self-blame.
For instance
, during the competition a member of that group or person always have faced to fail which means aforesaid notion.
In addition
, it could be
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a reason
the reason
reason
for being bad with others and competitor as well
Nonetheless
,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
would contend that in contribution have many advantages, one particularly good example of
this
is people solve all problems mutually and
consequently
most of
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the time
time
they find
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a solution
the solution
solutions
solution
. By way of conclusion,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
once again reaffirm my position that work of people
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together leads
together lead
to high level of achievements.

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