Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child's development. However, other say that things like television or friends have the must important influence on them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The most significant factor
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influencing
influencing
baby's development is always debatable. Some people think that it is p
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parenting, which
arenting, which
have an effect upon
affects
affects
more while others think television and friends affects the changes in
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the minors
the mi
nors.
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essay will discuss both sides in detail and provide evidence as to parents h
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a deeper impact
ave a deeper
impact on the kid's growth. There are several ways in which power of the digital media has trai
a young person of either sex
youngsters
ned our you
ngsters in recent times. They learn skills and academic kno
with rapid movements
quickly
wledge
qui
the act of observing; taking a patient look
watching
ckly by
w
the visible part of a television transmission
videos
atchin
g videos television.
In contrast
, to it,
this
entertainin
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inversely influenced
has inversely influenced
g world inversely influ
e
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the adolescent's health and intensity
nced the adolescent's health and
intensity to do
any specific behavior
activities
activity
physical ac
tivities are reduced dramatically. The
second
reason which
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on
de
pends on
this
expansion are friends who are responsible for nurturing bond of friendship.
However
, the common problem of teasing and rivalry may result in mental blockages and psychological issues. Parenting,
on the other hand
, is the main branch of improvising the overall growth of any toddler to become one successful person in
life
. Indeed, parents are not only responsible for creating the fundamental gro
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the little ones
little ones
littler ones
und for th
e little ones, but they
also
guide you throughout your
life
span. Appar
a person who cares for persons or property
guardians
gardens
ently, th
ese guardians will induce negative
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the child
pres
sure on youth only when they become over possessive and extremely stricter.
F
seemingly without interruption
continually
continuously
or instance
, continually forcing your son or daughter to perform better in academics or winning the sport event as a winner each time. In view of the discussions outlined above, it can be recapitulated that all the eleme
the quality of being significant
significance
nts have it
s significance in terms of maturing from toddler
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
to adult
. In my opinion, parents have the greater
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a child's life
the child's life
domination
in a
child
's
life
as they are the one who teaches you to be a good friend or person, and
also
helps to see television.

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