1. It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast the knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important. why

Although
learning from books is considered as a basic way to reach available abundant source of
knowledge
, I strongly believe that the education we obtain from
experience
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the experience
is more beneficial than from books
.
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cause to open or to become open
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opinion
pain
in
this
essay. Reading books is regarded as a primitive educational method which help people easily gain and expand
knowledge
.
Also
, reading
books plays
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books, plays
an important role in mastering language development and language skills that support you a lot both in your mother
tounge
a mobile mass of muscular tissue covered with mucous membrane and located in the oral cavity
tongue
and other foreign languages. Contrary to many people thought, books not only for educational purpose, it is
also
for health improvement.
Book
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The book
A book
is a good companion to overworked
people which
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people, which
can effectively reduce stress or keep your spirit up. In spite of the enormous benefit reading books bring, not everything we learn is contained in books, it
also involves
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is also involved
in our normal lives. Books provide us theoretical
knowledge
while our experience gives us
first
hand
knowledge
. Every
doctrine learning
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doctrine, learning
from stories, books will be pointless if we cannot use it in life. Reading books can nourish your
soul but
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soul, but
it
couldnot
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could not
mature you, while experience can. After each time making mistakes, you will be much more confident in solving problems and dealing with difficulties without confusing, worrying. Despite the fact that learning from stories and books are all educational purposes, I prefer practical
knowledge
to theory
knowledge
.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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