Some people say History is one of the most important schoool subjects. Othert people think that, in todays world, subjects like Science and technolog are most important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education has many
a division of some larger or more complex organization
branches
brances
, the main ones are scientific and humanitarian. In
this
aspect, some people think that the most required
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subjects
subject
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are
is
History, while others believe that Science and Technology are more important. History as subject helps to develop in student skill as an
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
analyzing
the information, on the basis of
this
the learners can find ways to avoid
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
pronlems
in social life. The conflicts that were in
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the past
past
, are still exist.
For example
, in the years of
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repression, many
repression many
nations as German, Kazaks deported to Kazakhstan
for the reason that; on account of
because
becaus
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
eof
conflicts in altitude between different ethnic groups. If there had not been that situations people would not to learn to respect
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the values
values
of others. Current time the technology develops very fast, and they
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take
are take
the big fragment of our daily life.
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Technologies
Technilogies
that are being used by people make hard works easier than in past, and
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notions
the notion
notion
about making our life easier contributes
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to thinking
to think
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broadly
broad
.
For example
,
firstly
was invented cleaning machine that partially
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automatically
automatic
, and
then
happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
after
afte
20
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years, inventors
years inventors
found that machine which can stroke. To
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sum
summ
up, they are equally important, as one learns to people be more tolerant, while the
second
one helps to us physically.

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