Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

Formal training at the universities have become an integral

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of any society. Even though, a few individuals think that the universities are creating more graduates than required and that the importance given for the formal

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learning needs to be lowered, others believe that formal training forms a really important

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in any society. In

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essay, I will discuss the significance of

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education

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for students.

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the

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education

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is important for everyone, there are limitations on the benefits provided.

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, it prepares students for the outside world as job seekers rather than job providers.

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, it is widely known that the majority of professional courses

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prepare

the pupils to take up jobs in their respective fields, rather than

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enable

them to start up their own career path.

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, it provides uniform curriculum

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all the individuals irrespective of their interests, which would result in certain students cramming up the subjects for the sake of scoring high for the

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exams and not for the love of learning it. Above all, universities recently have been busy churning out graduates at a rapid rate that the supply of talented graduates

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currently far exceeds

the demand, which in turn has resulted in many graduates remaining unemployed.

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, there are many other factors that

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play

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in any individual's life other than

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education

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. Employability is one of the biggest

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factors

that concerns the market, which at times, is attained by the public themselves rather through a formal training.

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, the stress needs to be placed upon developing the practical skills of an individual and not just their theoretical knowledge.

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, it is an accepted matter that many

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attend vocational college after graduation in order to attain hands-on training experience in their field.

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, it goes by the proverb that formal

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will make us a living and self-

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will make us a fortune. To exemplify, we have a lot of cases with thousands of billionaires who never went to college, but ended up being much more successful than their counterparts. To conclude, there are much more important factors that play a crucial role in determining the success of any individual than their

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education

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, even though it plays a big

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.

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, with advances in technology, self-

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is expected to come up in a bigger way.