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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss.

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At
Suggestion
In
For
 recent years, there is an ongoing debate whether by completing
further
 study in university or by joining the workload directly will lead someone to be employed in a good job. I personally believe that continuing higher study in a course at a university will alleviate the opportunity to get involved in the labour market. The light competitiveness in
work field
Suggestion
the work field
, in some ways, increases the need for qualified workers. Moved by
this
 trigger, universities develop the quality of the students by improving the specialisations and by extending the variety of courses. Taken as an example, business courses have been expanding the field of study in a wide range of majors
such
 as public health business which
provides the participants to
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provides the participants
 focus on hospital management, pharmacy business, etc.
or
introduces an alternative
Or
 social based entrepreneur which develops the candidates to build their social-based businesses by a small amount of money.
On the other hand
, undeniably, students in university seem to be the lack of practical experiences in working environment. Being an employee means more of responsibilities, job deadlines, etc.
and
Suggestion
And
 there are several consequences if they show bad performances. To solve
this
 case, internship programmes and core soft skill training can be effective ways out.
University
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The university
 faces challenges to keep improving the curricula in order to prepare the students with work experiences by entering the utmost graduate students with 3 months working programmes in thrived companies as well as with several working skills training
such
 as leadership training. To sum up, in spite of the growth of demand for
universities'
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university
 graduates in good offer jobs, it is inevitable that they have more positive sides to fit them in
such
 enormous opportunities.

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