Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

During the
last
ten or twenty years, the costs of fuels have become higher than in the past, about
this
there is a discussion because it is
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
though
that more the price of fuels will rise, less it will be consumed, and,
consequently
, it will be possible to soften the pressure on
this
kind of resources. In my opinion,
this
is not the way to reach the aims we talked before, in fact, petrol and
fuel
are too strictly
being joined in close association
connected
communicated
conneceted
to our
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
lifes
to let us renounce them so easily.
First
of all, being
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fuelled
fuels
a primary good, people will not care about the amount of
money
they have to spend to get it. It is
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thanks
thank
to petrol that our technologies can work, without it the entire energy system will collapse. Anyway, it is
also
true that we cannot count on the
fuel
resources forever, but I think that there is a solution. Rather than spending
money
on fuels, because the price raised up, it will be more convenient to use the
money
saved in
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
ways.
For example
, it can develop
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resources, programs
resources programs
about finding
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an
a
eco-
fuel
, or to developing alternative engines that do not need petrol to work.
Besides
,
this
means
also
to give less
money
to the
fuel
industries which, without richness will be forced to find
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a different way
different ways
different way
to earn. In conclusion, the point is not to make the
fuel
costs more in order to avoid its
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
conception
consuption
, but to find alternatives that will give less damage both to the Hearth and the environment.

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