You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these
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days, many
days many
families prefer to
work
in regards to
both
parents. The question is, what the benefits for
both
parents to
work
and what are the drawbacks if they
work
at the same time? In
this
essay, I am going to discuss
both
views and draw my own opinion. In terms of the positive side, some people argue that the parents have a job that will increase their income. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that today's life depends more on the value of the money. To illustrate, some parents have
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higher
high
incomes since
both
of them
work
.
In other words
, they can afford all the expenses they face in their life.
Hence
their offspring will have better life accordance
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with
to
health care, education and so on.
However
, others believe that children need support from their parents.
Firstly
, when any human born the
first
things that babies know are their parents.
In other words
, the children have an innate towards their parents for love.
Secondly
, if the parents
work
without caring about their kids that will lead to loss of identity for the child.
This
is because when the baby grows
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up, he
up he
/she starts to build their personality.
Also
, the normal family can not be
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completely
completed
complete
without any members are starting to be absent. In conclusion,
although
there are many people support the idea that parents Should
work
, others believe in the importance of family relationships. In my
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own
on
point of with you, I believe that the
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negative
negatives
side outweighs the
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Positive
Positives
side in regard to
both
parents working at the same moment.

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