You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these

days many

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days, many

families prefer to

work

in regards to

both

parents. The question is, what the benefits for

both

parents to

work

and what are the drawbacks if they

work

at the same time? In

this

essay, I am going to discuss

both

views and draw my own opinion. In terms of the positive side, some people argue that the parents have a job that will increase their income. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that today's life depends more on the value of the money. To illustrate, some parents have

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higher

incomes since

both

of them

work

.

In other words

, they can afford all the expenses they face in their life.

Hence

their offspring will have better life accordance

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with

health care, education and so on.

However

, others believe that children need support from their parents.

Firstly

, when any human born the

first

things that babies know are their parents.

In other words

, the children have an innate towards their parents for love.

Secondly

, if the parents

work

without caring about their kids that will lead to loss of identity for the child.

This

is because when the baby grows

up he

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up, he

/she starts to build their personality.

Also

, the normal family can not be

complete

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completely

completed

without any members are starting to be absent. In conclusion,

although

there are many people support the idea that parents Should

work

, others believe in the importance of family relationships. In my

on

belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive

own

point of with you, I believe that the

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negative

side outweighs the

Positives

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Positive

side in regard to

both

parents working at the same moment.