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The chart below show the percentage of water used of different purpose in six different areas of the world

The chart below show the percentage of water used of different purpose in six different areas of the world
#show #percentage #water #purpose #six #areas #world
These six
pie-charts
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pie charts
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 show
different
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the different
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purpose
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purposes
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 of
water
 usage throughout the six different
areas
 as a percentage. In general, there are three different
purpose
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purposes
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 with six different
areas
. Industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use had been measured as
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a percentage
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percentage
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percentages
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. Every
purpose
 had changed with the area. Most of the
areas
were
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apply
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consumed
water
 for
agriculture
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agricultural
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purpose
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purposes
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specially
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especially
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 Africa, Central
Asia
, South East
Asia
 and South America. North America and Europe used more
water
 for industrial usage. It was 48% and 53% respectively.
Very
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 low amount of
water
 was consumed for domestic activities. Central
Asia
, Africa and South East
Asia
were
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apply
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used
water
 for agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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in
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at
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constant
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a constant
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 level.
Additionally
,
water
 consumption
of
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for
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 other purposes in
this
 area
were
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was
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 very low. It was always below 15%, but other
areas
 are completely different. Less
water
 consumption was 5% for industrial
purpose
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purposes
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 in
CentraAsia
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Centralia
,
although
, high
water
 usage was reported in Central
Asia
 for Agricultural uses.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words purpose, water, areas, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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