In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Initiating with government programs to motivate people to move their industries,
business
to
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in
regional areas has been part of
few countires angenda
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the few country's agenda
few countires agenda
a few country's agenda
few country's agenda
few country's angenda
few countries angenda
which is
enocuraging
giving courage or confidence or hope
encouraging
many and here is why I think so. One of
primary reason
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the primary reason
on why I think that schemes like
this
are good is that it will uplift the spirits of people in regional areas as industries and
business
moving to their location means more
jobs
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job
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to them, they will not have to move out of their region to city looking for
job
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a job
the job
jobs
nor they
will will
expresses the future tense
will
have to feel to be valued to less. A move like
this
from
government
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the government
will make sure that they work on infrastructure properly so that industries can work properly and
business
people can even think of either relocating or don't find difficult in
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
regularly. Useful to industries or
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
is that utilization of local talent will prove
benfit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
benefits
to them, investors as they will not have to pay more money by hiring residents outside that area. And we always know human will be in positive spirits when they are around family. Not only in terms work is good, but
industralists
someone who manages or has significant financial interest in an industrial enterprise
industrialists
will be able to input local
favor
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavour
in their
business
and expand it
outisde
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
by making people aware and
also
, growing themselves in the domain which they are
expertize
a person with special knowledge or ability who performs skillfully
experts
, but
also
in other things.
This
will
also yeild in
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also yield
also yield in
economy growth
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the economic growth
economic growth
of the country. Some of the
disadavantges
are, chances of local
favor
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavour
vanishing because of
business
from outsiders and
also
, one
forsee
a powerful effect or influence
force
pose
face
potentital
existing in possibility
potential
danger to climate
also
though these can be taken care, but if not handled with care and proper planning
then
it can cause harm in
future
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the future
. Still reform like
this
has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
cons I still feel
this
more advantage.

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