In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Initiating with government programs to motivate people to move their industries,

business

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regional areas has been part of

few countires angenda

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the few country's agenda

few countires agenda

a few country's agenda

few country's agenda

few country's angenda

few countries angenda

which is

enocuraging

giving courage or confidence or hope

encouraging

many and here is why I think so. One of

primary reason

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the primary reason

on why I think that schemes like

this

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are good is that it will uplift the spirits of people in regional areas as industries and

business

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moving to their location means more

jobs

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job

oppurtunity

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunity

opportunities

to them, they will not have to move out of their region to city looking for

job

Suggestion

a job

the job

jobs

nor they

will will

expresses the future tense

will

have to feel to be valued to less. A move like

this

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from

government

Suggestion

the government

will make sure that they work on infrastructure properly so that industries can work properly and

business

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people can even think of either relocating or don't find difficult in

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

regularly. Useful to industries or

comapnies

an institution created to conduct business

companies

is that utilization of local talent will prove

benfit

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

benefits

to them, investors as they will not have to pay more money by hiring residents outside that area. And we always know human will be in positive spirits when they are around family. Not only in terms work is good, but

industralists

someone who manages or has significant financial interest in an industrial enterprise

industrialists

will be able to input local

favor

the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people

flavour

in their

business

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and expand it

outisde

beyond the boundary of; external to

outside

by making people aware and

also

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, growing themselves in the domain which they are

expertize

a person with special knowledge or ability who performs skillfully

experts

, but

also

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in other things.

This

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will

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also yeild in

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also yield

also yield in

economy growth

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the economic growth

economic growth

of the country. Some of the

disadavantges

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are, chances of local

favor

the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people

flavour

vanishing because of

business

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from outsiders and

also

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, one

forsee

a powerful effect or influence

force

pose

face

potentital

existing in possibility

potential

danger to climate

also

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though these can be taken care, but if not handled with care and proper planning

then

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it can cause harm in

future

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the future

. Still reform like

this

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has

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

cons I still feel

this

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more advantage.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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296 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

regional areas
big cities
encouraging
industries
businesses
advantages
disadvantages
economic growth
overcrowding
traffic congestion
employment opportunities
balanced regional development
preservation of natural resources
quality of life
cultural diversity
lack of infrastructure
amenities
skilled workers
impact on the environment
decline in the economy
social and cultural challenges
integrating
new industries

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