Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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In the world we can find a lot of differences between poor and rich countries,

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make me think the life is not fair, so I would like that the developer nations would aim

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poor people, for doing the Earth plant more equality. Certainly

wealth

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wealthier

wealthiest

wealthy

countries in general have their basics needles cover, while the poor countries many times don’t know if they will have food, health,

education

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, needles that even is in the right humans. For

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reason

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would be interesting to support poor countries, because

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can enhance the World.

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example if

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example, if

improve their

education

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nations

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nation

could be better persons, due to the

education

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is the base of everything. The way of help to poor people is giving knowledge,

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should be the inversion, because I don’t see like an

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an airfield equipped with control tower and hangars as well as accommodations for passengers and cargo

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give

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material

things, due to

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aim is not permanent.

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hand I

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would love to Governments of Poor country look after of their citizens, but in the reality we know that

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does not happen, because in general their leaders only looking for their own welfare, and don’t worry about the real problems.

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never will finish, but help with

education

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could be short the distances.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

interconnected
global stability
economic self-sufficiency
sustainable development
capacity-building
foreign aid
mutual benefits
trade relations
long-term outcomes
dependency
moral obligation
alleviate poverty
humanitarian assistance
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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Fully explain your ideas

Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that art plays a crucial role in society, while others think it is a luxury. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or a negative situation?

Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?