The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.

One study about the fast
food
in Britain was
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focused
focus
in two
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topics
topic
: the
first
part showed the amount of money per
week
that
of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
British
british
people spent
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on
in
junk
food
, and
on the other hand
the investigation showed the trends of
consumption
in fast
food
. The research
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splits
split
the amount of money per
week
in three
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kinds
kind
of social income: high, average and low, where the investigation figure out that the high income spent 45 pounds per
week
, and the low income waste 7 pounds per
week
.
Also
, the study showed that fast
food
most popular
consumption
was hamburger and the pizza was
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chosen
chose
like
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the least
the fewer
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
favorite
. Beside, the study
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shows
show
the habits of
consumption
of fast
food
in three decades (1970-1990), where the investigation reveals that fish and chips have been
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
decrease
decreases
decresse
their
consumption
and the hamburger and pizza have been
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increasing
increased
increase
increases
increese
their popular in the people in Britain.
Nevertheless
the
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
favorite
fast
food
in Britain is Hamburger, because the people in 1990
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consumed
consumption
500 grammes.

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