The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

One
a new
trend
of
work
is
puting
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putting
in
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on
fashion
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a fashion
between
millenials
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Millenials
millennials
militias
, who think that having several careers is better for the
profesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
professionals
develop
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development
than have only
one
.
This
explain
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explains
it, because today we can see that the group of young people
don’t
like to follow rules, so if in
one
part time job they are
treat
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treated
with strong, and
this
don’t
agree them, the young people can be able to survive
throug
from beginning to end
through
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
laboral
a person who favors a political philosophy of progress and reform and the protection of civil liberties
liberal
source.
On the other hand
, for
the old
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older
people the
trend
of
work
is keep
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has kept
is kept
keeps
one
work
,
this
because
give
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gives
them stability, and
this
group of employees is adapted in
this
model of
work
, they
don’t
like the change.
Besides
,
this
adults like the tradition,
then is
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have then been
are then being
so freak
see
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sees
old people with two or more
career
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careers
.
However
, both trends have advantages and disadvantages. In the
first
trend
we can see like a bad
atribute
something given or done as an expression of esteem
tribute
the
inestability
an unstable order
instability
, because they
don’t
have a source of
work
constante
everything that is included in a collection and that is held or included in something
content
. In
this
way, in the
second
trend
the weak point is that they have to support everything in the
work
, even
humilations
state of disgrace or loss of self-respect
humiliation
, insults or bad treat.
Nevertheless
, in my personal
opinion I
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opinion, I
think that the is better have only
one
career, due to
this
allow do a
work
with a major quality, because
this
way the
work
would be more
specialistic
advocating or following the socialist principles
socialistic
. I believe that the key
of
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to
the success
is try
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is to try
is trying
to be
the good
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the best
in
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at
only
one
thing, because as the people say who a lot of have, fewer have.
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