Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

It has always been a contentious issue whether capital punishment should be there or not for serious criminals.Introducing
death
punishment can be beneficial for
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society, however
society
however
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,
,
for
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an individual
individual
it can be devastating
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.
.
In my opinion
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,
,
it should be applicable to any criminal and should be banned. On the one hand, there are few advantages of
this
type
penality
.
Firstly
,
this
approach will be beneficial for
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the safety
safety
and security of the society. It will
impart gradually
instill
instilled
instills
instilll
a fear in the mind of criminals
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.
Consequently
, deter them to
engage in
do
dao
any crime.
For instance
, Singapore is the country where for drug trafficking,
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the death penalty
death penalty
death peanality
is applicable.
Therefore
, in that
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country's
country
county
century
couuntry
drug related crimes are negligible.
Secondly
, it would
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help to decrease
help to decrease in
crime rate. Because
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
pepole
can learn a lesson from the previous
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criminal
criminal's
criminals
punishment that they should mend their
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ways
wqys
otherwise
, they will be
subjected to a physical (or chemical) treatment or action or agent
treated
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by
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the same way
same way
. It will create fear and they will not try to breach the laws.
Hence
, it can be beneficial
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in
by
many ways.
On the other hand
, there are some negative facets of
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the death penalty
death penalty
death
penality
. One.
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The issue
Issue
issue
is that it will be
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an infringement
infringement
infringment
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of
on
to
the basic rights of human. Everyone has a right to live. So, nobody can decide about end of others life.Another issue is that it is
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a brutal decision
brutal decision
in terms of humanitarian ground. Everyone values a lot kindness and
(physiology) responsiveness to external stimuli; the faculty of sensation
sensitivity
sestivity
towards each other.
This
kind of approach would ruin the moral values. So, drawbacks of
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the death penalty
death penality
death penalty
Death penality
dwath penalty
dwath
penality
cannot be overlooked. In conclusion,
Although
death
the act of punishing
penalty
penality
will
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
definately
help in developing crime free society, its cons will devastating for criminals and their families.

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