Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

It has always been a contentious issue whether capital punishment should be there or not for serious criminals.Introducing
death
punishment can be beneficial for
society
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society, however
however
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for
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an individual
it can be devastating
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In my opinion
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it should be applicable to any criminal and should be banned. On the one hand, there are few advantages of
this
type
penality
.
Firstly
,
this
approach will be beneficial for
safety
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the safety
and security of the society. It will
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impart gradually
instill
instilled
instills
a fear in the mind of criminals
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Consequently
, deter them to
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engage in
do
any crime.
For instance
, Singapore is the country where for drug trafficking,
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the death penalty
death penalty
is applicable.
Therefore
, in that
couuntry
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country's
country
county
century
drug related crimes are negligible.
Secondly
, it would
help to decrease in
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help to decrease
crime rate. Because
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(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
can learn a lesson from the previous
criminals
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criminal
criminal's
punishment that they should mend their
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ways
otherwise
, they will be
treayed
subjected to a physical (or chemical) treatment or action or agent
treated
by
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the same way
. It will create fear and they will not try to breach the laws.
Hence
, it can be beneficial
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in
many ways.
On the other hand
, there are some negative facets of
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the death penalty
death penalty
penality
. One.
issue
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The issue
Issue
is that it will be
infringment
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an infringement
infringement
to
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of
on
the basic rights of human. Everyone has a right to live. So, nobody can decide about end of others life.Another issue is that it is
brutal decision
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a brutal decision
in terms of humanitarian ground. Everyone values a lot kindness and
sestivity
(physiology) responsiveness to external stimuli; the faculty of sensation
sensitivity
towards each other.
This
kind of approach would ruin the moral values. So, drawbacks of
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the death penalty
death penality
death penalty
Death penality
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penality
cannot be overlooked. In conclusion,
Although
death
penality
the act of punishing
penalty
will
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
help in developing crime free society, its cons will devastating for criminals and their families.

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