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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is undeniable that the technological advances have enormous impact in the lifestyle of people.
since
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Since
 the
last
 3 centuries the machineries have been substituting the
labors
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labours
labels
labour
 in the market and it
is even progressing
Suggestion
has even progressed
 in the larger scales.
However
, these developments affect the workplace, but the drawback is not more than the outweigh. It is obvious, that nowadays machineries have been replacing the employment in different sectors and the investors prefer to purchase technological devices in their businesses rather than hiring several unskilled employees who will increase the waste and needs more time to consume.
For example
, in the Toyota company, the robots produce 100 vehicles per day and these robots are working without any accurately and fast. If we compare the impact of robots with human resources,
then
 we can easily understand that the
labors
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labours
labels
leaves
 cannot produce as much precise and fast as the technology can. So, it will be more profitable for
business
 owners to replace
employee
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employees
the employee
 with machineries. From the other side, the technological advances are depending
to
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on
 human resources and it is employees who lead
this
 advancement. The machineries only occupied in the
productions
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production
 industries and mainly affected
this
 part of
business
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the business
. In the other
business
 sectors
such
 as services, transport, and
construction we
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construction, we
 need for human resources to lead the
business
 by using
from
the framework for a pair of eyeglasses
frame
 technology. Instance, it is
engineer
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engineers
 who should draw the maps
for
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of
 the building, in the same
vein we
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vein, we
 need employees who do the other administrative tasks. I am agreeing for the technological advancement as it was bringing so many comforts in our lives. To conclude, considering the advantage and disadvantage of technological advancement, the outweigh is more
then
drawback
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draw back
.
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