It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the

driver

who was driving the bus on Tamilnadu to Telangana route on 25th April that was scheduled at 8: 00 pm. I was in the seat number 1

that is

exactly behind the

driver

's seat. A fellow passenger requested the

driver

to stop the loud music which was unpleasant,

this

happend

come to pass

happened

around 1:30 in the midnight.

Insteaded

Suggestion

Instead

of being considerate, the

driver

replied to the passenger

rudly

in an impolite manner

rudely

, not just that, he

also

increased the

volume which

Accept comma addition

volume, which

caused more disturbance to all the people who were travelling that night.

This

behaviour would lead to a bad recognition of your travel services; your company will soon be in danger of losses if you will not take any action against

such

unruly people. I

therefore

request you to send the warning to the person who was driving on the day when the incident took place.

Moreover

, your company should form disciplinary rules for the staff, and for passengers, a service line to complain should be set which will ensure the traveller's comfort and safety. I hope my feedback will be

implement

Suggestion

implemented

soon. Yours faithfully, Ms.Komal Seeta

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