It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the
driver
who was driving the bus on Tamilnadu to Telangana route on 25th April that was scheduled at 8: 00 pm. I was in the seat number 1
that is
exactly behind the
driver
's seat. A fellow passenger requested the
driver
to stop the loud music which was unpleasant,
this
come to pass
happened
happend
around 1:30 in the midnight.
Suggestion
Instead
Insteaded
of being considerate, the
driver
replied to the passenger
in an impolite manner
rudely
rudly
, not just that, he
also
increased the
Accept comma addition
volume, which
volume which
caused more disturbance to all the people who were travelling that night.
This
behaviour would lead to a bad recognition of your travel services; your company will soon be in danger of losses if you will not take any action against
such
unruly people. I
therefore
request you to send the warning to the person who was driving on the day when the incident took place.
Moreover
, your company should form disciplinary rules for the staff, and for passengers, a service line to complain should be set which will ensure the traveller's comfort and safety. I hope my feedback will be
Suggestion
implemented
implement
soon. Yours faithfully, Ms.Komal Seeta

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