Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self employed?

During earlier days
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,
,
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the majority
majority
of the workforce depended on a consistent income for their living.
However
, in present times, many people choose to be self-employed and prefer to be their own boss.
This
is primarily due to a decrease in the number of regular jobs due to automation and
an attack that penetrates into enemy territory
penetration
peneteration
of technology among the population. Automation and
contrived by art rather than nature
artificial
artifical
intelligence
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have reduced
has reduced
the number of individuals required for regular jobs
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,
,
by that means or because of that
thereby
therby
bringing human intervention to considerably
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lower
low
levels.
For example
, in the
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
tradional
bread manufacturing
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industry, which
industry which
earlier employed a large
the force of workers available
workforce
worforce
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,
,
figures suggest that human intervention has been
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brought
bought
down by more than 90%.
This
has forced more people to take up their own jobs
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,
,
particularly the ones that require their own skill.
This
trend has
by that means or because of that
thereby
therby
increased the disposable income in the hands of the individual.
Moreover
, it instills a sense of satisfaction and
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
fulfillment
in the minds of people.
Furthermore
, technology has a huge part to play in
this
changing trend,
By or through which
whereby
wherby
people are more closely interconnected, removing the need of middlemen. Despite these advantages, self-employment often comes with a cost.
Firstly
,
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
entreprenurs
have to sacrifice considerable amounts of time to get a
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regular, consistent
regular consistent
income, which wasn't the case when they
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were
where
in regular employment.
Secondly
, being self employed is not everyone's cup of tea, it often requires high interpersonal skills and networking and
thus
making it very challenging.For
an occurrence of something
instance
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, in India more than 30% of the startups end up in failure.
However
, despite these challenges a growing number of people are moving to self employment and
this
has created a necessary boost to the workforce of these countries in terms of innovation and development.
Hence
, if one has the passion required to be an
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
enterprenur
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,
,
in or at that place
there
their
is nothing more satisfying and
put in effect
fulfilling
fullfilling
than creating your own enterprise.

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