some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human life to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Experimenting on animals is a conventional
way
with the aim of to assuring about product's
safety
in most of the industries. So far it has been very helpful in science's development. It may be
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the only way
only
way
that
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helps
help
to assure about some important product
safety
.
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act on verbally or in some form of artistic expression
dealt
deals
death
dealth
with some of opinions for and against
this
matter. Proponents claim that there is not the other
way
that can be useful for product testing as well as experimenting on animals and
this
method is the only
way
which we can
use
to assure about
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product
product's
products'
products
safety
which had a minimum error so far. Especially in
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human
human's
health issues
such
as
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drug
drugs
industry using animals have been the best
way
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for
from
many
last
years to now and scholars believe that
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animal's
animals'
animal
animals
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helps
helped
helpes
them to aware from products side effects. Beside
this
, they
also
believe that
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a human's life
human's life
is far more important than animals.
On the other hand
,
this
method led to many concerns regarding about
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the animals' safety
animals' safety
animal safety
animal's safety
animals
safety
. Critics believe that because animals are alive, definitely they suffer from these kind of experiments and we have no right to endanger the life of animals and these experiments should be stoped.
Also
experimenting on animals may have not exact results and
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finally, don't
finally don't
be trusted, so if scientists
use
these results for produce new products may be caused serious problems.
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In
in
conclusion humans and animals life is important.
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It
it
is not easy to decide about any of
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them, but
them but
in my
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opinion, there
opinion there
is no need to
use
animals for testing all
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kinds
kind
of products and we can
use
those just for essential products
such
as drugs that have many serious impacts on human health.

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