People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People change their
way
of life. Recently, people spend their daily life with gadget rather than talk to each other personally. In
this
essay I am going to discuss the reasons why people use
interact
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interactive
online and whether it advantage or disadvantage. Interact online is very popular in our current society for some reasons. These reasons are cut the distance, no need
time
(instantly) and easy to do. The invention of the smartphone changes the
way
of our community to interact with each other. Before that invention, people usually communicate in a very traditional
way
, talk face-to-face, but immediately, people can communicate with others by phone. They are doing
this
because we are able to call or message
on to
to on
onto
our counterpart wherever we are
then
it doesn't
consuming
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consume
time
.
Moreover
, online interacting is cheaper as we don't have to travel to our counterpart place, so it can cut for transportation expenses. We just have to call or message our friend, as an example, if we wish to
tell
express in words
say
something without move out from home.
Furthermore
, it will give us more
time
to do other things. Another example, lately, people no need to go to the store to buy their needs, because they can order online using their smart phone. If they want to order something, they just need to open store's web and make their
transaction
Suggestion
transactions
on it. It will cost less and provide more free
time
compared with
traditional
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traditional ways
the traditional way
way
. It will be beneficial for development because we have more
time
, do not need travelling which means
cut
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cutting
off our expenses and
also
easy for
old
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older
people communicate with other and easy for everyone to buy their needs. In conclusion, there are some reasons why people prefer to do online interaction lately, and it is beneficial for
development
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developing
developers
.

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