In general people do not talk to one another when using public transport. Why is this so, and what could be done to change this situation.

It is quite common these days travelling in the public
transport and thousands
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and transport thousands
of people travel around the world. While travelling to any place the
person
do not talk to
one
another. I think they feel shy to talk with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
and they don'
t
know with each other. I am going to explain the essay in detail below
paragraph
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the paragraph
. On the
one
hand
now a days
in these times
nowadays
every
all people
everyone
one
using public services. They meet
new
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a new person
new people
person
daily but
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daily, but
, they do not talk with each other. Because
number
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a number
of different people are travelling. In
generally
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general
,
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,
If the
person
is from the same town they try to communicate with and knowing where they travelling
too
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with
to
each other. So, if the
person
we don'
t
know we try to talk with them
because, every
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, because every person
person
has a different attitude and having good communication skills.
For
instance my
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instance, my
brother and his friend travelling to
one
place suddenly, the
third
person
sat in the middle of them. So they are trying to avoid that
person
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person, however
however
they don'
t
the
person
and he didn'
t
ask any permission to sit in the middle.
On the other hand
, we have
chance
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a chance
the chance
to change the situation. While travelling to
one
place we try to make some new relationship with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
. I think
this
is the best chance to make friendship with him and we have the right time to knowing each other. After that, we can
sharing
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share
some contact information and in
future
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the future
we can meet ant any time in any situation.
For example
the recent survey "The Hindhu" research says that who
make
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makes
new relations all the time they have more popularity and having more influences than others. In conclusion, while trying to make new
friends people
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friends, people
don'
t
feel shy to talk with each other. We have to take the opportunity to make new relations having like
second family
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a second family
. We have rights to talk with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
freely at any moment. Making new friends will improve the way of communication skills.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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