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Some parents think that advertisements are misleading for children, while advertisers claim that they provide knowledge. Give your opinion.

#parents #advertisements #children #advertisers
Hi Lucia How are you? It was so nice to meet you
last
 week in Sydney at the sales meeting. How was the rest of your trip? Did you see any kangaroos? I hope you got home to Mexico City OK. Anyway, I have the documents about the new Berlin offices. We're going to be open in three months. I moved here from London just
last
 week. They are very nice offices, and the location is perfect. There are lots of restaurants, cafés and banks in the area. There's
also
 public transport; we are
next
 to
an
Suggestion
a
 U-Bahn (
that is
 the name
for
Suggestion
of
 the metro here). Maybe you can come and see them one day? I would love to show you Berlin, especially in the winter. You said you have never seen snow – you will see lots here! Here's a photo of you and me at the restaurant in Sydney. That was a very fun night! Remember the singing Englishman? Crazy! Please send me any other photos you have of that night. Good memories. Please give me your email address and I will send you the documents. Bye for now Mikel

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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