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Some people claim that not enough to the waste from homes is rescyled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make a people recyle more of their waste.

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It is true that many people that the adequate amount of garbages are not recycled from houses and
this
 volume is possible to increase with rules are set by authorities. As for me, it is probable that increasing
this
 rate by different ways out of rules.
To begin
 with, an effective education system is the one of significant ways to improve citizen’s behaviour about the recycling. According to, John
Hardey
having rugged physical strength; inured to fatigue or hardships
Hardy
, the education minister of the USA, the authority of education in the USA set an environmental programme in the primary school in 2018.
This
 programme included many significant knowledge about recycling. After
this
 programme, recycling rates skyrocketed from %20 to %40. Without doubt,
This
 data clearly showed us about
this
 programme’s achievements.
In addition
, unfortunately, many of recycled objects went to the garbage without recycling against that some nations get prized system for separating these objects from non recyclable items. To demonstrate, some governments use machineries for giving prizes for recycling items. Two years ago, I went to Amsterdam, citizens dropped their plastic bottles to a machine and get a free train ticket. As stated by the Holland Statistical Department, the amount of plastic wastes decreased halved in 2019.
Finally
, The
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
 is a crucial way of delivering a message to citizens. Without doubt, it is capable of affecting mass people. To illustrate, a commercial in Turkey about waste and recycling.
This
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
 gave some numbers an a message about that if we recycled 2 million tonnes of papers, we would save 3.000 tress, if we recycled 5 million tonnes of fried oils, our seas would seen like crystal waters,
however
 we did not. After
this
 commercial, people’s awareness about recycling in Turkey increased. Environment and Human Press published a study about recycling after
this
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
 realised.
This
 report illustrated that the number of using
recycling
Suggestion
recycled
 garbage increased two times more than the previous time of
this
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
. In conclusion, many people is not eager to obey the rules in the world,
however
 if we educate them, we would increase the recycling rate.
Furthermore
, Prize systems and marketings are probable to increase
this
 rate, too.
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