The chart show the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK.

The chart show the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart show the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK.
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bar chart
illustrate
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information about
proportion
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the proportion
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of men and
women
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in six
type
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types
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of educational
school
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in 2010 in British. It has
from
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a nursery
school
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to
university
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a university
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. At first glance, male and female
teachers
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are different in
percentage
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in each type of
school
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.
Women
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predominated
in
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among
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younger
student
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students
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.
Nursery
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and primary
school
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,
women
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were the most posts at over 95 and 90
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percent
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, respectively. For the older children and younger adults,
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percentage
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the percentage
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of female
teachers
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were
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was
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nearly male
teachers
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. College both sexes of
teachers
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were equal, but
secoundary
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secondary
school
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women
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were higher (
apporximately
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approximately
10
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percent
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per cent
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).
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, in university, the
percentage
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of female professors
were
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less than male professors. For men, the pattern was the reverse. merely 2 or 3
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percentage
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were male
teachers
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. They were equal in college, but private training
institute
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were a little higher around 10
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percent
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per cent
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. Male professors
predominant
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are predominant
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in
university
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universities
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at 70
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percent
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per cent
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.
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, the figure shows that genders are
significant
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a significant
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factor in
pattern
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the pattern
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of employment within each educational sector.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, school, teachers, percentage, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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