Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money
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because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with
point of view. In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild
have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about
particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species.
, there is no compelling reason why we should let
die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every
square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild
, and
should be our aim. I
disagree with the idea that protecting
is a waste of resources. the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild
, and most scientists agree that these habitats are
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oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By
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habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth. In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild
should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
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