Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money
animals
Suggestion
Animals
because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with
this
point
Suggestion
Point
of view. In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st
century
Suggestion
Century
. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and
there
Suggestion
There
is nothing special about
this
particular century that means that we suddenly
have
Suggestion
Have
the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species.
Furthermore
, there
is
Suggestion
Is
no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit
or
introduces an alternative
Or
destroy every
last
square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the
world’s
Suggestion
World’s
population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild
animals
Suggestion
Animals
, and
this
should be our aim. I
also
disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources.
the
Suggestion
The
protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most
scientists
Suggestion
Scientists
agree that these habitats are
also
crucial
fo
appropriate to; intended for
for
to
rainforests
Suggestion
Rainforests
produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If
we
Suggestion
We
destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet
would
Suggestion
Would
far outweigh the costs of conservation. By
prot
the highest ranking position for a university academic
prof
habitats
Suggestion
Habitats
, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth. In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist,
and
Suggestion
And
I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users